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What Enigmas did you notice?

- who is stalking them?
- what happens next?
- why were they arguing?
- what happens to Toan?

What did you like about the film?

-text message
-hiding behind the tree
-the breathing
-tracking shots
-diegetic sound
-acting
-location

What could be improved?

- not being able to know that she is picking up a phone
-credits
-breaks the 180 degree rule
-breathing was too much
-some shots were too short
-wasn't clear as to what happened to the boy
-maybe some music
-the scream
-maybe add some transitions
-sound over titles

When asked whether or not you would want to continue watching it...
many yes' were given.